Oh, wow, I love her outfit. ;O

Totally color it!

I will, i think ill do it later ~or start at least haha~

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Bow before Hoes

Well, Tari, I suppose you're going to get your wish. I'm going to comment on something now.

By the looks of things, there's a wind blowing to the left. However, in my opinion the left part of her cloak looks like there is no wind at all; it just seems to fall down naturally, so you could do more with that side of the coat to make it look like the wind was picking it up.

For her hair, personally, I think it would look better if you continued the line for the left side of her bangs all the way up to the hair band. Speaking of the headband, while I'll admit I'm not that knowledgeable in hair bands, I think they're supposed to fit around the skull. However, the way you've drawn it doesn't fit the size of her head.

Onto her arms. Her right arm, which you oh so conveniently stuck behind her back, doesn't really make sense to me unless she's holding onto something behind her back, but you're not indicating that at all so I'm guessing she's not. If you must insist on not drawing arms, at least do it in a way so it doesn't look awkward. Also, from the looks of things, her left arm is suffering from some incorrect anatomy, and I believe her elbow should be somewhere below her ribcage, and not at her waist.

A few last comments would be, "Where the hell is her right ear?" and "Unless your trying to indicate a shadow or something, her collarbone should not look that at the center."

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>:3 >:3 >:3

Oh joy a wish come true... thanks davey ill all of this in mind next time i draw

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Bow before Hoes

Really nice

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Ale ja widzę , że świat już prawie runął..
I co ?
I mam, kurcze, dobry humor !

thanks im planning on coloring it i just dont know it i will ever get it done lol.

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I think it will be wonderful ^^

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Ale ja widzę , że świat już prawie runął..
I co ?
I mam, kurcze, dobry humor !

I hope so lol

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Bow before Hoes

Well done, Tari. ^^
It's a pretty good recreation, if I do say so myself.
I still need to get around to getting a scanner so I can draw out Kumi for ya.
You've done fan art like this for me, but I've only done one for you.
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Amel: She's not just some hot chick,she's THE hot chick!
Jav: Watch out! Her ego's about to go critical!
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